The world overwhelmed her with so many thoughts,
That she decided to keep them inside
One question after the other was thrown at her,
So she chose to run and hide

The world overburdened her with so much pain,
That she couldn’t express it out loud
She hid behind white lies and plastic smiles,
To put on a show for the crowd.

The world overdosed her so many sorrows,
She swallowed her tragedy away
The thoughts in her mind the most violent of all,
For they were silent till the very last day.

Her words could fill oceans, but she only told them a drop.


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  1. Hey, why have you removed the last two posts? BTW I have tried to write a poem. It would be great to know what you think and to get some honest feedback. Thank you.

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      1. Thanks for reading. I’m a beginner at poetry. Any suggestions and critique would definitely help a lot especially coming from someone who pens good ( sometimes great) poems at least thrice a week.

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      2. It’s a really great poem! I can’t believe you’d call yourself a beginner. I love your language use the most. I’d love to see more of your poetry!!!
        And thank you very much 🙂

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